{"id":6202,"date":"2022-07-07T15:52:03","date_gmt":"2022-07-07T08:52:03","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/?p=6202"},"modified":"2022-07-07T15:52:03","modified_gmt":"2022-07-07T08:52:03","slug":"cach-thuc-tang-diem-tieu-chi-coherence-cohesion","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/cach-thuc-tang-diem-tieu-chi-coherence-cohesion\/","title":{"rendered":"D\u00d9NG LINKING WORDS \u0110\u1ec2 T\u0102NG \u0110I\u1ec2M TI\u00caU CH\u00cd COHERENCE &#038; COHESION &#8211; D\u00d9NG NH\u01af TH\u1ebe N\u00c0O CHO \u0110\u00daNG?"},"content":{"rendered":"<div id=\"toc_container\" class=\"toc_light_blue no_bullets\"><p class=\"toc_title\">M\u1ee5c l\u1ee5c<\/p><ul class=\"toc_list\"><li><a href=\"#Dinh_nghia_Coherence\"><span class=\"toc_number toc_depth_1\">1<\/span> \u0110i\u0323nh nghi\u0303a Coherence<\/a><\/li><li><a href=\"#Dinh_nghia_Cohesion\"><span class=\"toc_number toc_depth_1\">2<\/span> \u0110i\u0323nh nghi\u0303a Cohesion<\/a><\/li><li><a href=\"#Lam_dung_tu_noi_va_cach_tang_diem_tieu_chi_Coherence_Cohesion_trong_IELTS_Writing\"><span class=\"toc_number toc_depth_1\">3<\/span> La\u0323m du\u0323ng t\u01b0\u0300 n\u00f4\u0301i v\u00e0 c\u00e1ch t\u0103ng \u0111i\u00ea\u0309m ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence &amp; Cohesion trong IELTS Writing<\/a><ul><li><a href=\"#Dung_nhieu_tu_noi_de_cai_thien_tieu_chi_Coherence_Cohesion_8211_co_nen_khong\"><span class=\"toc_number toc_depth_2\">3.1<\/span> D\u00f9ng nhi\u1ec1u t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i \u0111\u1ec3 c\u1ea3i thi\u1ec7n ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence &amp; Cohesion &#8211; c\u00f3 n\u00ean kh\u00f4ng?<\/a><\/li><li><a href=\"#Cach_tang_diem_tieu_chi_Coherence_and_Cohesion\"><span class=\"toc_number toc_depth_2\">3.2<\/span> C\u00e1ch t\u0103ng \u0111i\u00ea\u0309m ti\u00eau chi\u0301 Coherence and Cohesion\u00a0<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/li><\/ul><\/div>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">M\u00f4\u0323t ba\u0300i vi\u00ea\u0301t IELTS kh\u00f4ng th\u00ea\u0309 li\u00ean k\u00ea\u0301t ch\u0103\u0323t che\u0303 va\u0300 li\u00ea\u0300n ma\u0323ch n\u00ea\u0301u kh\u00f4ng s\u01b0\u0309 du\u0323ng t\u01b0\u0300 n\u00f4\u0301i. Tuy v\u00e2\u0323y la\u0323m du\u0323ng t\u01b0\u0300 n\u00f4\u0301i qua\u0301 m\u00e2\u0301t co\u0301 th\u00ea\u0309 khi\u1ebfn th\u00ed sinh m\u00e2\u0301t \u0111i\u00ea\u0309m ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence &amp; Cohesion<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u00a0trong ba\u0300i thi IELTS Writing.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Coherence la\u0300 gi\u0300? Cohesion la\u0300 gi\u0300? L\u1ea1m du\u0323ng <span style=\"color: #000080;\">Linking words<\/span> (t\u01b0\u0300 n\u00f4\u0301i) a\u0309nh h\u01b0\u01a1\u0309ng nh\u01b0 th\u1ebf n\u00e0o \u0111\u1ebfn b\u00e0i Writing c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n? La\u0300m th\u00ea\u0301 na\u0300o \u0111\u00ea\u0309 t\u0103ng \u0111i\u00ea\u0309m ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence &amp; Cohesion<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">?<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ha\u0303y cu\u0300ng kha\u0301m pha\u0301, ti\u0300m hi\u00ea\u0309u th\u00e2\u0323t ky\u0303 v\u00ea\u0300<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence &amp; Cohesion<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, gia\u0309i quy\u00ea\u0301t tri\u00ea\u0323t \u0111\u00ea\u0309 ca\u0301c v\u00e2\u0301n \u0111\u00ea\u0300 tr\u00ean v\u01a1\u0301i ba\u0300i vi\u00ea\u0301t na\u0300y ca\u0301c ba\u0323n nhe\u0301!<\/span><\/p>\n<p>C\u00e1c b\u1ea1n mu\u1ed1n t\u00ecm hi\u1ec3u chi ti\u1ebft h\u01a1n v\u1ec1 Linking Words th\u00ec \u0111\u1ecdc b\u00e0i n\u00e0y:<\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/linking-words-trong-bai-thi-ielts-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">LINKING WORDS TRONG B\u00c0I THI IELTS WRITING<\/a><\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<h2><span id=\"Dinh_nghia_Coherence\"><b>\u0110i\u0323nh nghi\u0303a Coherence<\/b><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><img class=\"size-full wp-image-6203 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/1-4.jpg\" alt=\"ti\u00eau ch\u00ed coherence &amp; cohesion - \u0111\u1ecbnh ngh\u0129a coherence\" width=\"1200\" height=\"800\" srcset=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/1-4.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/1-4-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/1-4-1024x683.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/1-4-768x512.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/study.com\/academy\/lesson\/coherence-in-writing-definition-examples.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"color: #000080; text-decoration: underline;\"><b>Coherence<\/b><\/span><\/a><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><em> (Ti\u0301nh ma\u0323ch la\u0323c)<\/em> la\u0300 kha\u0301i ni\u00ea\u0323m \u0111\u1ec1 c\u1eadp \u0111\u1ebfn vi\u1ec7c t\u1ed5 ch\u1ee9c th\u00f4ng tin, d\u00f9ng \u0111\u1ec3 chi\u0309 v\u00ea\u0300 m\u1ee9c \u0111\u00f4\u0323 ro\u0303 ra\u0300ng k\u1ebft n\u1ed1i, logic v\u1ec1 m\u1eb7t \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng c\u1ee7a t\u1eebng \u0111o\u1ea1n c\u0169ng nh\u01b0 trong c\u1ea3 ba\u0300i vi\u00ea\u0301t.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">S\u1ef1 r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng n\u00e0y c\u1ea7n hi\u1ec7n di\u1ec7n xuy\u00ean su\u1ed1t b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft, t\u1ee9c \u1edf 03 c\u1ea5p \u0111\u1ed9 nh\u01b0 sau:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\">Trong t\u1ed5ng th\u1ec3 m\u1ed9t b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft<\/span> <em>(discourse)<\/em><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\">Trong m\u1ed9t \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n, ho\u1eb7c gi\u1eefa c\u00e1c c\u00e2u v\u0103n<\/span> <em>(inter-sentence)<\/em><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\">Trong m\u1ed9t c\u00e2u v\u0103n<\/span> <em>(intra-sentence)<\/em><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2><span id=\"Dinh_nghia_Cohesion\"><b>\u0110i\u0323nh nghi\u0303a Cohesion<\/b><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><img class=\"size-full wp-image-6205 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/2-4.jpg\" alt=\"ti\u00eau ch\u00ed coherence &amp; cohesion - \u0111\u1ecbnh ngh\u0129a cohesion\" width=\"1200\" height=\"580\" srcset=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/2-4.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/2-4-300x145.jpg 300w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/2-4-1024x495.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/2-4-768x371.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"http:\/\/www.writingcentre.uct.ac.za\/sites\/default\/files\/image_tool\/images\/167\/Cohesion.pdf\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"color: #000080; text-decoration: underline;\"><b>Cohesion<\/b><\/span><\/a><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><em> (Ti\u0301nh li\u00ean k\u00ea\u0301t)<\/em> l\u00e0 ti\u00eau ch\u00ed \u0111\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 t\u00ednh li\u00ean k\u1ebft c\u1ee7a b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft, d\u1ef1a tr\u00ean kh\u1ea3 n\u0103ng s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng ng\u1eef ph\u00e1p v\u00e0 t\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng,\u00a0 ch\u1eb3ng h\u1ea1n nh\u01b0 t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i, quan h\u1ec7 t\u1eeb, \u2026 nh\u1eb1m t\u1ea1o ra s\u1ef1 k\u1ebft n\u1ed1i v\u00e0 m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c cho c\u00e1c m\u1ec7nh \u0111\u1ec1 trong c\u00e2u, c\u00e1c c\u00e2u trong \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u00e0 c\u00e1c \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n trong b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">N\u00f3i c\u00e1ch kh\u00e1c, n\u1ebfu t\u00ednh m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c <span style=\"color: #000080;\">ta\u0323o n\u00ean s\u01b0\u0323 ro\u0303 ra\u0300ng<\/span> cu\u0309a ba\u0300i vi\u00ea\u0301t thi\u0300 ti\u0301nh li\u00ean k\u00ea\u0301t se\u0303 la\u0300 <span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u201cch\u00e2\u0301t k\u00ea\u0301t di\u0301nh\u201d<\/span> giu\u0301p ca\u0301c ph\u00e2\u0300n li\u00ean quan va\u0300 g\u0103\u0301n k\u00ea\u0301t ch\u0103\u0323t che\u0303 v\u01a1\u0301i nhau h\u01a1n.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">M\u00f4\u0323t v\u0103n ba\u0309n c\u00e2\u0301u tha\u0300nh t\u01b0\u0300 nhi\u00ea\u0300u tha\u0300nh ph\u00e2\u0300n nho\u0309 \u0111\u01b0\u01a1\u0323c go\u0323i la\u0300 c\u00e2u. Tuy v\u00e2\u0323y, m\u00f4\u0323t t\u00e2\u0323p h\u01a1\u0323p ca\u0301c c\u00e2u ri\u00eang le\u0309 thi\u0300 ch\u01b0a \u0111u\u0309 \u0111\u00ea\u0309 ta\u0323o n\u00ean m\u00f4\u0323t v\u0103n ba\u0309n co\u0301 y\u0301 nghi\u0303a. Gi\u01b0\u0303a ca\u0301c c\u00e2u c\u00e2\u0300n pha\u0309i co\u0301 m\u00f4\u0323t y\u00ea\u0301u t\u00f4\u0301 \u0111o\u0301ng vai tro\u0300 \u201cch\u00e2\u0301t xu\u0301c ta\u0301c\u201d \u0111\u00ea\u0309 ta\u0323o s\u01b0\u0323 li\u00ean k\u00ea\u0301t v\u01a1\u0301i nhau; y\u00ea\u0301u t\u00f4\u0301 \u0111o\u0301 ch\u0103\u0301c ch\u0103\u0301n la\u0300 Cohesion.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em>V\u00ea\u0300 ba\u0309n ch\u00e2\u0301t,<\/em><\/span> ti\u0301nh li\u00ean k\u00ea\u0301t kh\u00f4ng th\u00ea\u0309 t\u00f4\u0300n ta\u0323i ri\u00eang l\u1ebb m\u00f4\u0323t mi\u0300nh. M\u00f4\u0323t v\u0103n ba\u0309n n\u00ea\u0301u m\u00e2\u0301t \u0111i ti\u0301nh li\u00ean k\u00ea\u0301t cu\u0303ng se\u0303 kh\u00f4ng co\u0300n \u0111\u01b0\u01a1\u0323c coi la\u0300 m\u00f4\u0323t v\u0103n ba\u0309n \u0111u\u0301ng nghi\u0303a.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span id=\"Lam_dung_tu_noi_va_cach_tang_diem_tieu_chi_Coherence_Cohesion_trong_IELTS_Writing\"><b>La\u0323m du\u0323ng t\u01b0\u0300 n\u00f4\u0301i v\u00e0 c\u00e1ch t\u0103ng \u0111i\u00ea\u0309m ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence &amp; Cohesion trong IELTS Writing<\/b><\/span><\/h2>\n<h3><span id=\"Dung_nhieu_tu_noi_de_cai_thien_tieu_chi_Coherence_Cohesion_8211_co_nen_khong\"><b>D\u00f9ng nhi\u1ec1u t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i \u0111\u1ec3 c\u1ea3i thi\u1ec7n ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence &amp; Cohesion &#8211; c\u00f3 n\u00ean kh\u00f4ng?<\/b><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ti\u0301nh ma\u0323ch la\u0323c cu\u0309a m\u00f4\u0323t v\u0103n ba\u0309n \u0111\u01b0\u01a1\u0323c \u0111a\u0301nh gia\u0301 d\u01b0\u0323a tr\u00ean vi\u00ea\u0323c s\u01b0\u0309 du\u0323ng <\/span><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><b>Cohesive devices <\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><em>(ca\u0301c ph\u01b0\u01a1ng ti\u00ea\u0323n li\u00ean k\u00ea\u0301t)<\/em> v\u00e0 <\/span><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><b>Referencing <\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><em>(ph\u00e9p tham chi\u1ebfu)<\/em>.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><img class=\"size-full wp-image-6207 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/3-4.jpg\" alt=\"t\u00ednh m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c c\u1ee7a 1 v\u0103n b\u1ea3n\" width=\"1200\" height=\"800\" srcset=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/3-4.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/3-4-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/3-4-1024x683.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/3-4-768x512.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/owll.massey.ac.nz\/referencing\/what-is-referencing.php\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"color: #000080; text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>Referencing<\/strong><\/span><\/a><\/span> <em>(ph\u00e9p tham chi\u1ebfu)<\/em> l\u00e0 t\u00ecnh hu\u1ed1ng m\u00e0 trong \u0111\u00f3 m\u1ed9t th\u00e0nh ph\u1ea7n kh\u00f4ng th\u1ec3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c gi\u1ea3i th\u00edch theo ng\u1eef ngh\u0129a n\u1ebfu n\u00f3 kh\u00f4ng \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c tham chi\u1ebfu \u0111\u1ebfn m\u1ed9t th\u00e0nh ph\u1ea7n kh\u00e1c trong v\u0103n b\u1ea3n. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Theo m\u00f4\u0323t h\u01b0\u01a1\u0301ng kha\u0301c, tham chi\u00ea\u0301u la\u0300 m\u00f4\u0323t t\u01b0\u0300 ho\u0103\u0323c m\u00f4\u0323t cu\u0323m t\u01b0\u0300 th\u00ea\u0309 hi\u00ea\u0323n nghi\u0303a cu\u0309a no\u0301 b\u0103\u0300ng ca\u0301ch nh\u0103\u0301c \u0111\u00ea\u0301n m\u00f4\u0323t tha\u0300nh ph\u00e2\u0300n kha\u0301c trong v\u0103n ba\u0309n.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Trong v\u0103n ba\u0309n, tham chi\u00ea\u0301u chia tha\u0300nh 2 loa\u0323i: <\/span><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><b>Cataphoric reference<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><em> (tham chi\u00ea\u0301u tr\u01b0\u01a1\u0301c)<\/em> va\u0300 <\/span><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><b>Anaphoric Reference<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><em> (tham chi\u1ebfu ph\u00eda sau)<\/em>.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/ted-ielts.com\/cohesive-devices\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"color: #000080; text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>Cohesive devices<\/strong> <\/span><\/a><\/span><em>(Ph\u01b0\u01a1ng ti\u1ec7n li\u00ean k\u1ebft)<\/em> l\u00e0 c\u00e1c t\u1eeb ho\u1eb7c c\u1ee5m t\u1eeb \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng \u0111\u1ec3 k\u1ebft n\u1ed1i \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng gi\u1eefa c\u00e1c ph\u1ea7n kh\u00e1c nhau c\u1ee7a v\u0103n b\u1ea3n. Cohesive devices cho ng\u01b0\u1eddi \u0111\u1ecdc bi\u1ebft m\u1ed1i quan h\u1ec7 gi\u1eefa c\u00e1c m\u1ec7nh \u0111\u1ec1, c\u00e2u v\u00e0 \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n kh\u00e1c nhau.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00f3 t\u1ed5ng c\u1ed9ng <span style=\"color: #000080;\">05 ph\u01b0\u01a1ng ti\u1ec7n li\u00ean k\u1ebft<\/span> ch\u00ednh trong ti\u1ebfng Anh, trong \u0111\u00f3 c\u00f3 04 ph\u01b0\u01a1ng th\u1ee9c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng ng\u1eef ph\u00e1p v\u00e0 01 ph\u01b0\u01a1ng th\u1ee9c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng nh\u01b0 sau:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><img class=\"size-full wp-image-6209 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/4-2.jpg\" alt=\"5 ph\u01b0\u01a1ng ti\u1ec7n li\u00ean k\u1ebft\" width=\"1200\" height=\"800\" srcset=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/4-2.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/4-2-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/4-2-1024x683.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/4-2-768x512.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">T\u1eeb n\u1ed1i ch\u1ec9 l\u00e0 1 trong 5 lo\u1ea1i t\u1ea1o t\u00ednh li\u00ean k\u1ebft cho v\u0103n b\u1ea3n ch\u1ee9 kh\u00f4ng ph\u1ea3i l\u00e0 ph\u01b0\u01a1ng ti\u1ec7n duy nh\u1ea5t \u0111\u1ec3 li\u00ean k\u1ebft v\u0103n b\u1ea3n. Ti\u00eau ch\u00ed ch\u1ea5m thi \u0111a\u0303 ch\u1ec9 r\u00f5: <\/span><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201cs\u1eed d\u1ee5ng \u0111a d\u1ea1ng c\u00e1c ph\u01b0\u01a1ng ti\u1ec7n li\u00ean k\u1ebft m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch ph\u00f9 h\u1ee3p\u201d<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">.\u00a0<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">M\u00f4\u0323t s\u00f4\u0301 ba\u0323n nghi\u0303 r\u0103\u0300ng s\u01b0\u0309 du\u0323ng t\u01b0\u0300 n\u00f4\u0301i se\u0303 ta\u0323o s\u01b0\u0323 li\u00ean k\u00ea\u0301t cho \u0111oa\u0323n v\u0103n. Tuy nhi\u00ean, nh\u01b0 \u0111\u00e3 \u0111\u1ec1 c\u1eadp \u1edf tr\u00ean, t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i ch\u1ec9 l\u00e0 m\u1ed9t trong nh\u1eefng y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 gi\u00fap t\u0103ng t\u00ednh m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c &amp; li\u00ean k\u1ebft cho b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Tuy nhi\u00ean, vi\u00ea\u0323c la\u0323m du\u0323ng qua\u0301 nhi\u00ea\u0300u khi\u1ebfn \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n th\u1eadm ch\u00ed tr\u1edf n\u00ean r\u1ed1i h\u01a1n v\u00ec c\u00e1c m\u1ed1i quan h\u1ec7 kh\u00f4ng r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng v\u00e0 ch\u1ed3ng ch\u00e9o nhau.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><img class=\"size-full wp-image-6211 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/5-2.jpg\" alt=\"l\u1ea1m d\u1ee5ng linking words\" width=\"1200\" height=\"500\" srcset=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/5-2.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/5-2-300x125.jpg 300w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/5-2-1024x427.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/5-2-768x320.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ca\u0301c ba\u0323n ha\u0303y cu\u0300ng nhi\u0300n la\u0323i b\u1ea3ng ti\u00eau ch\u00ed ch\u1ea5m \u0111i\u1ec3m IELTS Writing:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><strong>Band 5.0:<\/strong> <em>\u201cd\u00f9ng kh\u00f4ng \u0111\u1ee7, kh\u00f4ng ch\u00ednh x\u00e1c ho\u1eb7c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng qu\u00e1 m\u1ee9c ph\u01b0\u01a1ng ti\u1ec7n li\u00ean k\u1ebft\u201d<\/em><\/span>.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><strong>Band 7.0:<\/strong> <em>\u201cs\u1eed d\u1ee5ng m\u1ed9t lo\u1ea1t c\u00e1c ph\u01b0\u01a1ng ti\u1ec7n li\u00ean k\u1ebft m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch th\u00edch h\u1ee3p, co\u0301 m\u1ed9t s\u1ed1 t\u01b0\u0300 s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng thi\u1ebfu\/ qu\u00e1 m\u1ee9c\u201d<\/em><\/span>.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<blockquote>\n<p><strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/nam-ro-04-tieu-chi-cham-diem-ielts-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">N\u1eaeM 04 TI\u00caU CH\u00cd CH\u1ea4M \u0110I\u1ec2M IELTS WRITING<\/a><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Vi\u1ec7c s\u1eed qu\u00e1 nhi\u1ec1u t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i nh\u01b0 v\u1eady kh\u00f4ng gi\u00fap th\u00ed sinh \u0111\u1ea1t band 7.0 m\u00e0 c\u00f2n b\u1ecb k\u00e9o xu\u1ed1ng band 5.0 v\u00ec m\u1ed9t trong nh\u1eefng l\u1ed7i c\u1ee7a band 5.0 l\u00e0 \u201cd\u00f9ng kh\u00f4ng \u0111\u1ee7, kh\u00f4ng ch\u00ednh x\u00e1c ho\u1eb7c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng qu\u00e1 m\u1ee9c ph\u01b0\u01a1ng ti\u1ec7n li\u00ean k\u1ebft\u201d.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">T\u00f3m l\u1ea1i, ch\u1ec9 s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i (Kh\u00f4ng s\u01b0\u0309 du\u0323ng nh\u01b0\u0303ng loa\u0323i kha\u0301c) ho\u1eb7c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng qu\u00e1 nhi\u1ec1u t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i s\u1ebd kh\u00f4ng \u0111\u1ea3m b\u1ea3o \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence &amp; Cohesion<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">.<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span id=\"Cach_tang_diem_tieu_chi_Coherence_and_Cohesion\"><b>C\u00e1ch t\u0103ng \u0111i\u00ea\u0309m ti\u00eau chi\u0301 Coherence and Cohesion\u00a0<\/b><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00f9ng ph\u00e2n t\u00edch v\u00ed d\u1ee5 d\u01b0\u1edbi \u0111\u00e2y \u0111\u1ec3 hi\u1ec3u r\u00f5 h\u01a1n v\u00e0 xem li\u1ec7u c\u00f3 c\u00e1ch n\u00e0o t\u0103ng \u0111i\u1ec3m ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence &amp; Cohesion kh\u00f4ng nh\u00e9!<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><b>Vi\u0301 du\u0323:<\/b><\/span><\/p>\n<table style=\"width: 100%; border-collapse: collapse; border-color: #000000; background-color: #c9e7ff;\" border=\"1\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 100%;\">\n<blockquote><p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Although <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">work takes precedence over everything else in our lives<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, people should spend time to switch off from work and give their personal lives equal measures of attention. Firstly,<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> overall physical, emotional and mental health should be the main concern. <\/span><b>In addition<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, having good physical health is the key point to stay energetic and maintain a great stress management solution. <\/span><b>On the other hand<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, another way for people to combat overloading working volume and get more time for their personal life is to clarify the boundaries for your schedule. Take for example, people can spend the whole week struggling with business\u2019s tasks but it is essential to dine out with your family and friends at least one day. There is no good negotiating for more time if you have to sacrifice a well-deserved weekend.<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>L\u1ed7i sai:<\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">L\u1ea1m d\u1ee5ng c\u00e1c li\u00ean t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i: <span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em>In addition<\/em><\/span><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">T\u1eeb \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng kh\u00f4ng \u0111\u00fang th\u00edch h\u1ee3p: <em><span style=\"color: #000080;\">On the other hand<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">V\u00ed d\u1ee5 \u0111\u01b0a ra kh\u00f4ng th\u1ef1c t\u1ebf: kh\u00f4ng gi\u1ea3i th\u00edch r\u00f5 hay m\u1edf r\u1ed9ng cho \u00fd ki\u1ebfn \u0111\u01b0a ra tr\u01b0\u1edbc \u0111\u00f3.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ec3 tr\u00e1nh b\u1ecb m\u1ea5t \u0111i\u1ec3m ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence &amp; Cohesion, h\u1ecdc vi\u00ean c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 tham kh\u1ea3o nh\u1eefng l\u01b0u \u00fd sau:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><img class=\"size-full wp-image-6213 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/6-2.jpg\" alt=\"l\u01b0u \u00fd \u0111\u1ec3 tr\u00e1nh m\u1ea5t \u0111i\u1ec3m ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence &amp; Cohesion\" width=\"1200\" height=\"800\" srcset=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/6-2.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/6-2-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/6-2-1024x683.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/07\/6-2-768x512.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110o\u1ea1n v\u0103n n\u00ean \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c vi\u1ebft l\u1ea1i nh\u01b0 sau:<\/span><\/p>\n<table style=\"width: 100%; border-collapse: collapse; border-color: #000000; background-color: #cce6ff;\" border=\"1\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 100%;\">\n<blockquote><p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Although <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">work takes precedence over everything else in our lives<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, people should spend time to switch off from work and give their personal lives equal measures of attention. Firstly,<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> overall physical, emotional and mental health should be the main concern. <\/span><b>It goes without saying that<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> having good physical health is the key point to help stay energetic and maintain a great stress management solution. <\/span><b>Moreover<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, another way for people to combat overloading working volume and get more time for their personal life is to clarify the boundaries for your schedule. Instead of just making a time table for career proposals, individuals should create one to manage personal events and keep track of your personal investment. There is no point in negotiating for more time if you have to sacrifice a well-deserved weekend.<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">V\u00e2\u0323y ba\u0300i vi\u00ea\u0301t \u0111a\u0303 ph\u1ea7n n\u00e0o la\u0300m ro\u0303 cho ba\u0323n nh\u1eefng \u0111i\u1ec3m li\u00ean quan \u0111\u1ebfn ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence &amp; Cohesion<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u00a0trong ba\u0300i thi IELTS Writing! 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