{"id":7198,"date":"2022-08-22T16:08:26","date_gmt":"2022-08-22T09:08:26","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/?p=7198"},"modified":"2022-08-22T16:08:26","modified_gmt":"2022-08-22T09:08:26","slug":"referencing-de-tang-coherence-cohesion-trong-writing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/referencing-de-tang-coherence-cohesion-trong-writing\/","title":{"rendered":"REFERENCING (PH\u00c9P THAY TH\u1ebe) &#8211; C\u00d4NG C\u1ee4 \u0110\u1eaeC L\u1ef0C \u0110\u1ec2 T\u0102NG COHERENCE AND COHESION TRONG WRITING"},"content":{"rendered":"<div id=\"toc_container\" class=\"toc_light_blue no_bullets\"><p class=\"toc_title\">M\u1ee5c l\u1ee5c<\/p><ul class=\"toc_list\"><li><a href=\"#Hieu_ve_Coherence_and_Cohesion_Tinh_mach_lac_va_lien_ket\"><span class=\"toc_number toc_depth_1\">1<\/span> Hi\u1ec3u v\u1ec1 Coherence and Cohesion (T\u00ednh m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c v\u00e0 li\u00ean k\u1ebft)<\/a><\/li><li><a href=\"#Referencing_phep_thay_the_trong_Writing\"><span class=\"toc_number toc_depth_1\">2<\/span> Referencing (ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf) trong Writing<\/a><\/li><li><a href=\"#Lam_the_nao_de_su_dung_Referencing_phep_thay_the\"><span class=\"toc_number toc_depth_1\">3<\/span> L\u00e0m th\u1ebf n\u00e0o \u0111\u1ec3 s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng Referencing (ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf)<\/a><ul><li><a href=\"#Su_dung_dai_tu_chi_dinh_demonstrative_pronouns\"><span class=\"toc_number toc_depth_2\">3.1<\/span> S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng \u0111\u1ea1i t\u1eeb ch\u1ec9 \u0111\u1ecbnh (demonstrative pronouns)<\/a><\/li><li><a href=\"#Su_dung_dai_tu_nhan_xung_personal_pronouns\"><span class=\"toc_number toc_depth_2\">3.2<\/span> S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng \u0111\u1ea1i t\u1eeb nh\u00e2n x\u01b0ng (personal pronouns)<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/li><li><a href=\"#Luu_y_khi_su_dung_Referencing_phep_thay_the\"><span class=\"toc_number toc_depth_1\">4<\/span> L\u01b0u \u00fd khi s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng Referencing (ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf)<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/div>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Khi nh\u1eafc \u0111\u1ebfn k\u1ef9 n\u0103ng vi\u1ebft trong IELTS, h\u1ea7u h\u1ebft c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n th\u01b0\u1eddng ch\u00fa \u00fd \u0111\u1ebfn b\u1ed1 c\u1ee5c v\u0103n b\u1ea3n hay s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Tuy nhi\u00ean, \u00edt ai \u0111\u1ec3 \u00fd r\u1eb1ng, c\u00f3 m\u1ed9t ti\u00eau ch\u00ed \u0111\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 kh\u00e1c c\u0169ng kh\u00f4ng k\u00e9m ph\u1ea7n quan tr\u1ecdng \u0111\u00f3 l\u00e0 <span style=\"color: #000080;\"><strong>Coherence and cohesion<\/strong><\/span> (T\u00ednh m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c v\u00e0 li\u00ean k\u1ebft) v\u00e0 <span style=\"color: #000080;\"><strong>Referencing<\/strong><\/span> (ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf) l\u00e0 m\u1ed9t c\u00f4ng c\u1ee5 h\u1eefu \u00edch \u0111\u1ec3 \u201cchi\u1ebfm tr\u1ecdn\u201d \u0111i\u1ec3m s\u1ed1 \u1edf ti\u00eau ch\u00ed n\u00e0y.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span id=\"Hieu_ve_Coherence_and_Cohesion_Tinh_mach_lac_va_lien_ket\"><strong>Hi\u1ec3u v\u1ec1 Coherence and Cohesion (T\u00ednh m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c v\u00e0 li\u00ean k\u1ebft)<\/strong><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Trong b\u00e0i thi IELTS Writing, c\u00f3 4 ti\u00eau ch\u00ed \u0111\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 v\u00e0 ch\u1ea5m \u0111i\u1ec3m b\u00e0i l\u00e0m \u0111\u00f3 l\u00e0:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong><span style=\"color: #000080;\">Task Achievement<\/span><\/strong> <em>(M\u1ee9c \u0111\u1ed9 ho\u00e0n th\u00e0nh y\u00eau c\u1ea7u c\u1ee7a \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i)<\/em><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong><span style=\"color: #000080;\">Coherence and Cohesion<\/span><\/strong> <em>(M\u1ee9c \u0111\u1ed9 m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c v\u00e0 li\u00ean k\u1ebft gi\u1eefa c\u00e1c \u00fd trong b\u00e0i)<\/em><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><strong>Lexical Resource<\/strong><\/span> <em>(V\u1ed1n t\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng)<\/em><\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\" aria-level=\"1\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><strong>Grammatical Range and Accuracy<\/strong><\/span> <em>(Ph\u1ea1m vi s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng v\u00e0 \u0111\u1ed9 ch\u00ednh x\u00e1c c\u1ee7a ng\u1eef ph\u00e1p)<\/em><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<blockquote>\n<p><strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/nam-ro-04-tieu-chi-cham-diem-ielts-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">N\u1eaeM 04 TI\u00caU CH\u00cd CH\u1ea4M \u0110I\u1ec2M IELTS WRITING<\/a><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00f3 th\u1ec3 th\u1ea5y, <strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/takeielts.britishcouncil.org\/sites\/default\/files\/ielts_writing-_coherence_cohesion.pdf\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span style=\"color: #000080; text-decoration: underline;\">Coherence and Cohesion<\/span><\/a><\/span><\/strong> l\u00e0 1 trong 4 ti\u00eau ch\u00ed ch\u1ea5m \u0111i\u1ec3m b\u00e0i thi IELTS Writing v\u00e0 chi\u1ebfm 25% s\u1ed1 \u0111i\u1ec3m b\u00e0i thi.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ea1t \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c \u0111i\u1ec3m cao v\u1edbi ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and Cohesion, b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u1ea7n c\u00f3 <span style=\"color: #000080;\">s\u1ef1 r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng, m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c<\/span> trong c\u00e1ch di\u1ec5n \u0111\u1ea1t, n\u1ed9i dung \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c tr\u00ecnh b\u00e0y m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch h\u1ee3p l\u00ed, c\u00f3 li\u00ean k\u1ebft gi\u1eefa c\u00e1c \u0111o\u1ea1n, c\u00e1c \u00fd v\u1edbi nhau. S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i v\u00e0 t\u1ed5 ch\u1ee9c th\u00f4ng tin m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch h\u1ee3p l\u00fd.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><img class=\"size-full wp-image-7199 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/1-14.jpg\" alt=\"referencing trong ielts writing\" width=\"1200\" height=\"800\" srcset=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/1-14.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/1-14-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/1-14-1024x683.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/1-14-768x512.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">M\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch ph\u1ed5 bi\u1ebfn \u0111\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ea1t \u0111i\u1ec3m trong ti\u00eau ch\u00ed Coherence and cohesion l\u00e0 s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb n\u1ed1i nh\u01b0 <span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em>\u201cfirstly\u201d, \u201csecondly\u201d, \u201cfurthermore\u201d, \u201chowever\u201d, \u201cin addition\u201d&#8230;<\/em><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p><strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/mot-so-discourse-markers-pho-bien-trong-ielts-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">M\u1ed8T S\u1ed0 DISCOURSE MARKERS PH\u1ed4 BI\u1ebeN TRONG IELTS WRITING<\/a><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Tuy nhi\u00ean vi\u1ec7c d\u00f9ng qu\u00e1 m\u1ee9c nh\u1eefng t\u1eeb nh\u01b0 th\u1ebf n\u00e0y c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 g\u00e2y <span style=\"color: #000080;\"><strong>\u201ct\u00e1c d\u1ee5ng ng\u01b0\u1ee3c\u201d<\/strong><\/span>, v\u00f4 t\u00ecnh l\u00e0m cho b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft tr\u1edf n\u00ean r\u1eddi r\u1ea1c thay v\u00ec li\u00ean k\u1ebft.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Nh\u01b0 v\u1eady \u0111\u1ec3 tr\u00e1nh t\u00ecnh tr\u1ea1ng tr\u00ean, c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch kh\u00e1c \u0111\u1ec3 gi\u00fap n\u00e2ng cao \u0111i\u1ec3m trong b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft \u0111\u00f3 ch\u00ednh l\u00e0 <span style=\"color: #000080;\"><strong>Referencing<\/strong><\/span> (ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf).\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ngo\u00e0i ra <span style=\"color: #000080;\">Referncing<\/span> c\u0169ng l\u00e0 m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch hay \u0111\u1ec3 <span style=\"color: #000080;\">tr\u00e1nh vi\u1ec7c l\u1eb7p t\u1eeb<\/span> khi c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n \u0111\u00e3 qu\u00e1 b\u00ed trong vi\u1ec7c t\u00ecm t\u1eeb \u0111\u1ed3ng ngh\u0129a (synonym).<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span id=\"Referencing_phep_thay_the_trong_Writing\"><strong>Referencing (ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf) trong Writing<\/strong><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><img class=\"size-full wp-image-7201 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/2-12.jpg\" alt=\"referencing l\u00e0 g\u00ec\" width=\"1200\" height=\"800\" srcset=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/2-12.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/2-12-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/2-12-1024x683.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/2-12-768x512.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>V\u00ed d\u1ee5:<\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">People nowasday eat a lot of sugar. <\/span><b>This<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> is not good for health.<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">T\u1eeb <strong><span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u201cThis\u201d<\/span><\/strong> \u1edf \u0111\u00e2y \u0111\u00e3 thay th\u1ebf cho c\u1ee5m <span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em>\u201ceating a lot of sugar\u201d<\/em><\/span>. \u0110i\u1ec1u n\u00e0y gi\u00fap cho hai c\u00e2u c\u00f3 s\u1ef1 li\u00ean k\u1ebft v\u00e0 c\u0169ng l\u00e0m cho c\u00e2u sau ng\u1eafn g\u1ecdn, b\u1edbt r\u01b0\u1eddm r\u00e0.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">M\u1ed9t v\u00ed d\u1ee5 kh\u00e1c cho Referencing.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em><b>Children<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> cannot understand abstract notions because <\/span><b>they<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> are too young.<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">T\u1eeb <strong><span style=\"color: #000080;\">&#8220;children&#8221;<\/span><\/strong> l\u00e0 m\u1ed9t t\u1eeb kh\u00e1 l\u00e0 kh\u00f3 \u0111\u1ec3 paraphrase v\u00ec synonym (t\u1eeb \u0111\u1ed3ng ngh\u0129a) v\u1edbi <span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em>children<\/em> <\/span>nh\u01b0 l\u00e0 <em><span style=\"color: #000080;\">kids<\/span><\/em> th\u00ec l\u1ea1i <span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u201cunformal\u201d<\/span>. Do v\u1eady, s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng <span style=\"color: #000080;\"><strong>\u201cthey\u201d<\/strong><\/span> \u0111\u1ec3 thay th\u1ebf cho <span style=\"color: #000080;\">children<\/span> c\u0169ng l\u00e0 m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch h\u1eefu \u00edch \u0111\u1ec3 tr\u00e1nh vi\u1ec7c l\u1eb7p t\u1eeb.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span id=\"Lam_the_nao_de_su_dung_Referencing_phep_thay_the\"><strong>L\u00e0m th\u1ebf n\u00e0o \u0111\u1ec3 s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng Referencing (ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf)<\/strong><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><img class=\"size-full wp-image-7203 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/3-12.jpg\" alt=\"s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng referecning trong writing nh\u01b0 th\u1ebf n\u00e0o\" width=\"1200\" height=\"800\" srcset=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/3-12.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/3-12-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/3-12-1024x683.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/3-12-768x512.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><\/p>\n<h3><span id=\"Su_dung_dai_tu_chi_dinh_demonstrative_pronouns\"><strong>S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng \u0111\u1ea1i t\u1eeb ch\u1ec9 \u0111\u1ecbnh (demonstrative pronouns)<\/strong><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">C\u00e1c \u0111\u1ea1i t\u1eeb ch\u1ec9 \u0111\u1ecbnh nh\u01b0 <span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em>this, that, these, those,&#8230;<\/em><\/span> c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c d\u00f9ng \u0111\u1ec3 thay th\u1ebf c\u00e1c s\u1ef1 v\u1eadt, s\u1ef1 vi\u1ec7c trong b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">L\u1ea5y v\u00ed d\u1ee5 nh\u01b0 ban n\u00e3y:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">People nowadays eat a lot of sugar<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">. <\/span><b>This <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">is not good for health.<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">M\u1ed9t v\u00ed d\u1ee5 kh\u00e1c:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The music stopped<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, and <\/span><b>that<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> upset everyone.<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<h3><span id=\"Su_dung_dai_tu_nhan_xung_personal_pronouns\"><strong>S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng \u0111\u1ea1i t\u1eeb nh\u00e2n x\u01b0ng (personal pronouns)<\/strong><\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0110\u1ec3 thay th\u1ebf cho con ng\u01b0\u1eddi ho\u1eb7c \u0111\u1ed1i t\u01b0\u1ee3ng n\u00e0o \u0111\u00f3, ta c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 d\u00f9ng <span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u0111\u1ea1i t\u1eeb nh\u00e2n x\u01b0ng<\/span> (personal pronouns) nh\u01b0 <span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em>I, you, we, they, he, she, it.<\/em><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">V\u00ed d\u1ee5:<\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Susan<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> dropped the plate. <\/span><b>She <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">was careless.<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">If Sam <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">buys a new bike<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, I will do<\/span><b> it<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> as well.<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span id=\"Luu_y_khi_su_dung_Referencing_phep_thay_the\"><strong>L\u01b0u \u00fd khi s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng Referencing (ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf)<\/strong><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><img class=\"size-full wp-image-7205 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/4-10.jpg\" alt=\"l\u01b0u \u00fd khi s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng referencing\" width=\"1200\" height=\"800\" srcset=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/4-10.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/4-10-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/4-10-1024x683.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/4-10-768x512.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><em>Th\u1ee9 nh\u1ea5t,<\/em> khi s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng Referencing (ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf), c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n n\u00ean c\u1ea9n th\u1eadn, <span style=\"color: #000080;\">tr\u00e1nh g\u00e2y s\u1ef1 kh\u00f3 hi\u1ec3u<\/span> cho ng\u01b0\u1eddi \u0111\u1ecdc.<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>V\u00ed d\u1ee5:<\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Air pollution can create a heavy impact on people\u2019s health; however, <\/span><b>this<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> is preventable.<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Vi\u1ec7c s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng t\u1eeb <span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u201c<\/span><\/span><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><b>this<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u201d<\/span> \u1edf \u0111\u00e2y c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 g\u00e2y s\u1ef1 kh\u00f3 hi\u1ec3u cho ng\u01b0\u1eddi \u0111\u1ecdc v\u00ec kh\u00f4ng th\u1ec3 bi\u1ebft \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c r\u1eb1ng l\u00e0 <span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u201c<\/span><\/span><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><b>this<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u201d<\/span> \u0111ang \u00e1m ch\u1ec9<span style=\"color: #000080;\"> \u201cair pollution\u201d<\/span> hay l\u00e0 <span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u201c<\/span><\/span><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><b>a heavy impact on people\u2019s health<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u201d<\/span>.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><em>Th\u1ee9 hai,<\/em> c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n KH\u00d4NG N\u00caN s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf \u1edf <strong><span style=\"color: #000080;\">c\u00e2u m\u1edf \u0111\u1ea7u<\/span><\/strong> \u0111o\u1ea1n hay c\u00e2u ch\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec1 (topic sentence). V\u00ec \u0111\u00e2y l\u00e0 c\u00e2u c\u1ea7n th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n r\u00f5 \u00fd v\u00e0 quan \u0111i\u1ec3m c\u1ee7a ng\u01b0\u1eddi vi\u1ebft n\u00ean, d\u00f9ng ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf s\u1ebd l\u00e0m cho c\u00e2u ch\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec1 c\u1ee7a \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n b\u1ecb y\u1ebfu \u0111i.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">V\u00ed d\u1ee5:<\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<table style=\"width: 100%; border-collapse: collapse; border-color: #000000;\" border=\"1\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 100%; background-color: #dbf0ff;\">\n<blockquote>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><b>Topic: <\/b><\/span><em>People consume more and more sugar and this is detrimental to their health. What are the reasons and solutions to the problem?<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 100%;\">\n<blockquote><p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">C\u00e2u ch\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec1:<\/span><\/strong> <i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In my opinion, <\/span><\/i><b><i>this<\/i><\/b><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> is due to the fact that many food companies add more sugar to make the food more <\/span><\/i><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">appetite<\/span><\/i><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">.<\/span><\/i><\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Trong tr\u01b0\u1eddng h\u1ee3p n\u00e0y vi\u1ec7c d\u00f9ng <span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u201c<\/span><\/span><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><b>this<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u201d<\/span> l\u00e0m cho c\u00e2u ch\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec1 b\u1ecb kh\u00f3 hi\u1ec3u, l\u00e0m cho ng\u01b0\u1eddi \u0111\u1ecdc kh\u00f3 n\u1eafm \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c tr\u1ecdng t\u00e2m. Thay v\u00e0o \u0111\u00f3 c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ed5i <span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u201c<\/span><\/span><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><b>this<\/b><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u201d<\/span> n\u00e0y th\u00e0nh <span style=\"color: #000080;\">\u201c<\/span><\/span><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><b>the rapid increase in sugar consumption<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201d.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><em>Th\u1ee9 ba,<\/em> khi d\u00f9ng ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf (Referencing) c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n c\u00f2n c\u1ea7n ph\u1ea3i l\u01b0u \u00fd \u0111\u1ebfn v\u1ea5n \u0111\u1ec1 <strong><span style=\"color: #000080;\">ng\u1eef ph\u00e1p<\/span><\/strong> nh\u01b0 d\u00f9ng <span style=\"color: #000080;\"><strong>it<\/strong><\/span> cho danh t\u1eeb s\u1ed1 \u00edt, <span style=\"color: #000080;\"><strong>they<\/strong><\/span> cho danh t\u1eeb s\u1ed1 nhi\u1ec1u ho\u1eb7c l\u00e0 nhi\u1ec1u \u0111\u1ed1i t\u01b0\u1ee3ng g\u1ed9p l\u1ea1i\u2026<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Nh\u01b0 v\u1eady, ngo\u00e0i c\u00e1ch d\u00f9ng li\u00ean t\u1eeb (connectors), c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n c\u00f2n c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng Referencing (ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf) nh\u1eb1m t\u0103ng \u0111\u1ed9 li\u00ean k\u1ebft cho b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft \u0111\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ea1t \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c \u0111i\u1ec3m cao trong ti\u00eau ch\u00ed <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"color: #000080;\">Coherence and Cohesion<\/span> (M\u1ee9c \u0111\u1ed9 m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c v\u00e0 li\u00ean k\u1ebft gi\u1eefa c\u00e1c \u00fd trong b\u00e0i).\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ngo\u00e0i ra, c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng c\u1ed9ng c\u1ee5 n\u00e0y \u0111\u1ec3 thay th\u1ebf m\u1ed9t s\u1ed1 t\u1eeb m\u00e0 kh\u00f4ng c\u00f3 t\u1eeb \u0111\u1ed3ng ngh\u0129a (synonym) ph\u00f9 h\u1ee3p, nh\u01b0 v\u1eady c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 h\u1ea1n ch\u1ebf \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c t\u00ecnh tr\u1ea1ng l\u1eb7p t\u1eeb.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Tuy nhi\u00ean, c\u1ea7n ph\u1ea3i c\u1ea9n th\u1eadn \u0111\u1ec3 tr\u00e1nh nh\u1eefng l\u1ed7i sai c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 g\u1eb7p khi s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf (Referencing).<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: right;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><b>\u00a0\u00a0<em>Nguy\u1ec5n T\u1ea5n Minh Quang<\/em><\/b><\/p>\n<p>Kh\u00e1m ph\u00e1 th\u01b0 vi\u1ec7n IELTS Wiki c\u00f9ng \u0110\u1ed9i ng\u0169 H\u1ecdc thu\u1eadt ILP:<\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p><strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/pronunciation-features-phan-1-strong-form-weak-form\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">M\u1ed8T S\u1ed0 PRONUNCIATION FEATURES TRONG IELTS SPEAKING \u2013 PH\u1ea6N 1: STRONG FORM V\u00c0 WEAK FORM<\/a><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/tra-loi-cau-hoi-to-what-extent-do-you-agree-or-disagree\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">C\u00c1CH TR\u1ea2 L\u1edcI C\u00c2U \u201cTO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?\u201d TRONG IELTS WRITING TASK 2<\/a><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/dictation-nghe-chep-chinh-ta-trong-ielts-listening\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">\u1ee8NG D\u1ee4NG C\u1ee6A PH\u01af\u01a0NG PH\u00c1P \u201cDICTATION\u201d \u2013 NGHE CH\u00c9P CH\u00cdNH T\u1ea2 TRONG IELTS LISTENING<\/a><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>M\u1ee5c l\u1ee5c1 Hi\u1ec3u v\u1ec1 Coherence and Cohesion (T\u00ednh m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c v\u00e0 li\u00ean k\u1ebft)2 Referencing (ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf) trong Writing3 L\u00e0m th\u1ebf n\u00e0o \u0111\u1ec3 s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng Referencing (ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf)3.1 S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng \u0111\u1ea1i t\u1eeb ch\u1ec9 \u0111\u1ecbnh (demonstrative pronouns)3.2 S\u1eed d\u1ee5ng \u0111\u1ea1i t\u1eeb nh\u00e2n x\u01b0ng (personal pronouns)4 L\u01b0u \u00fd khi s\u1eed d\u1ee5ng Referencing (ph\u00e9p thay th\u1ebf) Khi 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