{"id":7908,"date":"2022-09-24T11:20:22","date_gmt":"2022-09-24T04:20:22","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/?p=7908"},"modified":"2022-09-24T11:20:22","modified_gmt":"2022-09-24T04:20:22","slug":"ielts-writing-task-2-sample-increase-in-violent-crime","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/ielts-writing-task-2-sample-increase-in-violent-crime\/","title":{"rendered":"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SAMPLE BAND 7.0+: AN INCREASE IN VIOLENT CRIME"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>D\u01b0\u1edbi \u0111\u00e2y l\u00e0 m\u1ed9t IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 7.0 -7.5. C\u00e1c b\u1ea1n tham kh\u1ea3o nh\u00e9!<\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/lam-the-nao-de-tan-dung-hieu-qua-mot-bai-writing-sample\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">L\u00c0M TH\u1ebe N\u00c0O \u0110\u1ec2 T\u1eacN D\u1ee4NG HI\u1ec6U QU\u1ea2 M\u1ed8T B\u00c0I WRITING SAMPLE?<\/a><\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<table style=\"height: 100%; width: 100%; border-color: #000000; background-color: #e0f0ff;\" border=\"1\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td>\n<blockquote>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Write about the following topic:\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b>Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers.<\/b><\/p>\n<p><b>To what extend do you agree or disagree with this option?<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Write at least 250 words<\/span><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<h2>IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample: An increase in violent crime<\/h2>\n<blockquote>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Nowadays, there is an <\/span><b>alarming<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> problem is that violent crime rates have increased considerably, particularly among young people under 18. To me, I strongly agree that <\/span><b>lack of<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> education from parents is the main reason for this situation. This below essay will analyse my view clearly.<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The first reason that can be easily seen is that in modern life, parents spend their time working to earn money. <\/span><b>Obviously<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, there is less time to take care of and supervise their children carefully. In addition, the gap between parents and children has been expanded; so these children have rarely had chances to share their feelings to their parents as well as to learn from the family side. Moreover, there are <\/span><b>plenty of<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> negative mediums\u00a0 such as violent films, bad things from the Internet of crime that are prominent\u00a0 around us; without parents\u2019 control, children have been influenced on those things easily.<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Another factor that needs to be mentioned is that unstable marriage life has led to a surge in <\/span><b>divorce<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> rates. Having a broken family and shortage of love from both mother and father have caused destruction of those youngsters in their study and some significant negative impacts of their psychology. As a result, children with <\/span><b>immature<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> character have become more aggressive, behave <\/span><b>rudely<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> and particularly imitated violent films or plunged headlong into social evils.<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">However, it is undeniable that parents are not the only factor that leads to an increased young violent crime percentage. Since it depends on the conceit of these youngsters about protecting themselves from harmful impacts, In spite of dealing with the above situation, some of those children have lived positively. <\/span><b>Nevertheless<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, from what has been considered above, parents have played <\/span><b>a vital role<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> to prevent growth in crime rates.<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000080;\"><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In conclusion, personality development of children is unable to be perfect without support from the family side. Furthermore, appropriate <\/span><b>nurturing<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> of parents not only has helped to drop crime in youngsters but also produced good citizens for our future.<\/span><\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<h2><strong>T\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng n\u1ed5i b\u1eadt<\/strong><\/h2>\n<table style=\"width: 100%; border-color: #000000;\" border=\"1\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center; background-color: #add1ff;\">\n<p><b>T\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng<\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 53.5859%; text-align: center; background-color: #add1ff;\">\n<p><b>Ngh\u0129a ti\u1ebfng Anh<\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center; background-color: #add1ff;\">\n<p><b>Ngh\u0129a ti\u1ebfng Vi\u1ec7t<\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><b>alarming<\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 53.5859%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">causing<\/span> <span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">worry<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> or <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">fear<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u0111\u00e1ng b\u00e1o \u0111\u1ed9ng<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center; background-color: #e3f0ff;\">\n<p><b>lack of<\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 53.5859%; text-align: center; background-color: #e3f0ff;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">the fact that something is not available or that there is not enough of it<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center; background-color: #e3f0ff;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">thi\u1ebfu, h\u1ee5t<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><b>Obviously<\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 53.5859%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">in a way that is easy to understand or see<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">r\u00f5 r\u00e0ng<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center; background-color: #e3f0ff;\">\n<p><b>plenty of<\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 53.5859%; text-align: center; background-color: #e3f0ff;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">an <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">amount<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> or <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">supply<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> that is enough or more than enough, or a <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">large<\/span> <span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">number<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> or <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">amount<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center; background-color: #e3f0ff;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">nhi\u1ec1u<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><b>divorce<\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 53.5859%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">an official or legal process to end a marriage<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">ly h\u00f4n<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center; background-color: #e3f0ff;\">\n<p><b>immature<\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 53.5859%; text-align: center; background-color: #e3f0ff;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">not having much experience of something<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center; background-color: #e3f0ff;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">ch\u01b0a tr\u01b0\u1edfng th\u00e0nh<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><b>rudely<\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 53.5859%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">in a way that is not polite<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">th\u00f4 l\u1ed7<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center; background-color: #e3f0ff;\">\n<p><b>Nevertheless<\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 53.5859%; text-align: center; background-color: #e3f0ff;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">despite what has just been said or referred to<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center; background-color: #e3f0ff;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">tuy nhi\u00ean<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><b>nurturing<\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 53.5859%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">to take care of, feed, and protect someone or something, especially young children or plants, and help him, her, or it to develop<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 22.5981%; text-align: center;\">\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">nu\u00f4i d\u01b0\u1ee1ng<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<blockquote>\n<p>Luy\u1ec7n t\u1eadp th\u00eam \u1edf \u0111\u00e2y n\u00e8: <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/takeielts.britishcouncil.org\/take-ielts\/prepare\/free-ielts-practice-tests\/writing\/academic\/task-2\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">IELTS practice Academic Writing test &#8211; Task 2<\/a><\/span><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p>C\u1ea3i thi\u1ec7n k\u1ef9 n\u0103ng IELTS Writing c\u00f9ng \u0110\u1ed9i ng\u0169 H\u1ecdc thu\u1eadt ILP:<\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p><strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/rut-gon-menh-de-quan-he-de-tinh-gon-bai-writing-task-2\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">\u1ee8NG D\u1ee4NG R\u00daT G\u1eccN M\u1ec6NH \u0110\u1ec0 QUAN H\u1ec6 \u201cREDUCTION OF RELATIVE CLAUSE\u201d \u0110\u1ec2 TINH G\u1eccN B\u00c0I VI\u1ebeT WRITING TASK 2<\/a><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/ung-dung-mindmap-de-lap-dan-y-bai-writing-hieu-qua\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">\u1ee8NG D\u1ee4NG MINDMAP \u0110\u1ec2 L\u1eacP D\u00c0N \u00dd B\u00c0I IELTS WRITING HI\u1ec6U QU\u1ea2<\/a><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/demo8.thuythu.com\/ilp\/loi-sai-khi-dung-tu-dong-nghia-trong-ielts-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">L\u1ed6I SAI PH\u1ed4 BI\u1ebeN KHI S\u1eec D\u1ee4NG T\u1eea \u0110\u1ed2NG NGH\u0128A TRONG IELTS WRITING<\/a><\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>D\u01b0\u1edbi \u0111\u00e2y l\u00e0 m\u1ed9t IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 7.0 -7.5. 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